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It feels like you've stabbed me a thousand times,

You have ripped me apart,

I feel as though my heart is bleeding,

And going to tear at its seams,

As if you shoved a blade down my throat multiple times,

Like the sharp pain of a dagger slicing through skin.
I want you to shrivel up and die,

You deserve to suffer,

You deserve to have your blood drain out of your inadequate body,

You ought to be crushed to the ground,

So fuck you!
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IntricateDance Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
-knows the feeling-
I cannot tell you how many times I wanted to put this feeling into so many words, but couldn't. Good job!
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izzy3301 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
thank u!
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authorofthings Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
this is...powerful. lol. i hope it'll get better for you
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izzy3301 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
thank u!
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marsforever Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very gruesome poetry!Your very good at showing your emontions throught poetry!
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izzy3301 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
thanks :))
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